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sex, sex, sex,

no – not really

but now I have your attention, come check out my first workshop ‘constructive critique’, and consider joining us.

http://www.neopoet.com/workshop/critique-workshop-positive-critiques

let’s see if we can really start helping each other, in a productive and non-intrusive way, using the tools of critique

would love to see you all there
love judy
xxx

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sex is after all
the only catchword
in the whole wide world
which is common to one and all
nationality colour creed apart
its of a guys gals gays lesbians an integral part
so many shall with sex only make a critical start
happy to you for critiquing me too

loved

your ideas would be welcome
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

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It all depends on the how the individual sees this, it is a loaded word,
and yet is basic to the continuity of mankind, and like the naked body, beautiful.

I hope I do what your workshop advocates in my comments, I strive to do so anyway.
annanya

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

oh so lovely to see you
where have you been? i have missed you. you and jeannie didn't call me when she visited you, or did you try and i wasn't there?

love and big hugs
judyanne
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

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Should have known this wasn't a request lmao..............stan

to the spider
lol
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

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The one with the young woman from TWILIGHT which i loved
especially the soundtrack! the West Coast of America so beautiful
I worked with a couple of poet writers.. hobbyists but we did have
quite the time...I still remember walking with a young tall angular
beauty in a dark blue dress and large sunglasses holding my
hand and her escorts hand.. she was braless and flawless
and almost caused a car crash.. People called us freaks and
we did not care..she went topless and we had tables and chairs
with cloth and wine set up at the summer cottage.. we swam
naked at dusk.. The human form has been inspiring many
from Venus De Milo to Andrew Wyeths Helga..
I loved Klimpts work and Talouse's nudes
and enjoyed the strip clubs and girls whom we took home
long ago.. I find Plath and Sexton with much verve and
vitality despite the passion and turmoil of emotions which
took their lives. Beauties...

I should work at a worship.. Maybe I will find the time
Judyanne I find you most interesting a poet!

please come across and follow the workshop, would love to have you join, i don't expect enybody to do very much extra writing or critiquing....

and your thoughts towards the discussions would be invaluable

join anytime xxx
love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

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rotflmao
i didn't even notice
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

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Your avatar is cropped with the golden section rule applied to art
and it doesnt have the horizon in the middle , the majority is the water
emphasis..and your image is not superimposed silhouette on
the sky and No flash going off so you look like a ghost.
Our Lake Nippy is wide enough that looking west it curves with
the gradient curve of the earth that it looks like a limitless expanse
of water... the islands are dreamy enough out there to have mirages
underneath with the thermal flux and the distant ridge at the shoreline
to the south is close enough to look like a point of land... I shall make
the effort to show up and participate!

if / when you yould like me to put you on the participant list... til / if then, do feel free to make any comments you'd like to the workshop
xxxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

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