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Brevity and poetry.... modernisation......

Submitted by loved on Mon, 2012-08-13 13:53

another ditch
another pitch
another screaming bitch....
maybe that's what one sees
when one is in the gory of it all,
some pain
some sorrow
but clap the multitudes all
a bout perhaps of joy
and
happiness for the boxer’s collection
ends in matchlessness
that’s what all wrestling is about
another money making
stitch perhaps
after all.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Roscoe Lane

Mon, 2012-08-13 18:37

Roscoe Lane's picture

We all wrestle with our poetry, and our conscience. No one is matchless in poetry, there's alway another battle, even if it's only in the mind. Nice poem .Regards Roscoe.

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

loved

Mon, 2012-08-13 23:05

loved's picture

its such a pleasure to see .....
an encouraging remark ,
once one opens up to read
ones poetry

loved

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