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Time is god ..open FOR DISCUSSION.. and your personal views
Time is god
let past slumber
in the folds of time,
let another sunrise
each time anew
to bring glory
in the name of
God
whom you call
Allah
but
I call
Time.
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Ian.T
Sat, 2012-06-02 17:12
Loved
As this is a Blog, I can reply without fear lol.
This is a bit disjointed and I believe that Time is purely a man made thing, and to it being the fourth dimension well since when has man made dimensions of any sort ?
Been about two thousand years since he found out there were angles and things, that point to infinity lol..Sorry about decrying your God has he got a face with twelve numbers Analogue on, or is he Digital ????
Just a couple of bad questions young Loved, Take care out there,
Yours, Sparrow
PS:- My friends tell me there is no such thing as time, so maybe the fourth dimension is relative position ???????
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Sat, 2012-06-02 17:59
the time here signifies
the time here signifies
human relations based on
environment ,
circumstances
and
heredity..
see you have been conversing with me now since eons passed
coz we both are time's elements and of Neopoets a part..
man has made so many things
but who has made man????
only Solar energy ,coupled with Earth and Water and Air
the four constituents within
you and me ..
now over millenia of years
and
that is time
nothing happens unless time favours us
for bad times and good times there 's a reccurring slot in each life.
Well i may stand out alone ,
never mind ....
I am entitled to my own version of life
time
and a god may be ...
Who heaven knows ,
may be you do,
not me.
loved
author commentIan.T
Sat, 2012-06-02 18:10
Loved
It is late will talk tomorrow, Yours Ian .T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Sun, 2012-06-03 00:29
OK
going out
later yes you say
I shall reply...
Its a discussion between two diverse and extremely independent minds .
But I assure you,that you fill in my menu of those guys,
who don't believe a word of what I say,
but relent at times,
till they revert again .
Do feel free with me.
loved
author commentIan.T
Sun, 2012-06-03 02:57
Loved
Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock, what's this I hear, it is but a clock
To show fragile man that he has an end and a beginning.
Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock, it will still be there, when we stop
It's a part of me I will leave behind, from the daily grind
Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock, it has now stopped, I hear it no more
I am now part of eternity, and they never keep the score...
Yours as always Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Sun, 2012-06-03 11:36
As long as we tick Ian...tis good...
each one has the freedom
to an independent thought process..
the small bard
It’s a rather difficult a subject to grasp.
but ultimately I may establish, what I say .
I have dissected the lives of over 0000's folks,
with abs confidence
and am still working….
I have nothing against a God,
in fact I propose mankind to follow''' blindly ...'''
the existence of the unknown....
as that cohesion will enable the masses to cling together
more later,
as this week I may be engrossed in other thoughts elsewhere,
so I shall revert ...
loved
author commentIan.T
Mon, 2012-06-04 05:34
Loved
The only thing that really exists is the unknown, it hides away from us always out of reach. We then have to strive fro ever to seek it out and in doing so we come across a lot of things in life.
That we meet here young Bard is not in time, as your time is of another land, and both are meaningless.
We meet here as a jumble of energy processed to bring thoughts to each other on many things.
I hope that we can enhance each others ways, as unto drinking water from a fresh spring.
We walk and talk of many things as the Walrus says yet those words written for another reason brings multiple thoughts to our minds.
Go well young Bard, the other day I passed the great Bard's house, in Stratford and sent him yours and my love, he just smiled...
Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Mon, 2012-06-04 09:17
I am sure you smiled back at the olden Bard
for and on behalf
of the young one ...
bard in small
tc
see you soon
loved
author commentjudyanne
Sun, 2012-06-03 06:03
timespace
what a lovely concept loved - to use time and god as analogy for each other
i do like the idea of my past and future being wrapped up securely in the folds of time, never to be really lost
i like this version better than the original
as i said, i don't agree with the theory of the original
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
loved
Sun, 2012-06-03 11:30
Judy, as I said I’m a contrarian person...
It’s a difficult subject to grasp.
but ultimately I will prove, what I say .
I have dissected the lives of over 20000 folks,
with utmost confidence
and am still working….
I have nothing against a God,
in fact I propose mankind to follow blindly
the existence of the unknown....
as that cohesion will enable the masses to cling together
more later, as this week I may be engrossed in other thoughts elsewhere, maybe
so I shall revert ...
loved
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