Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

Packing Prayer

Submitted by faerybeki on Fri, 2012-05-18 19:58

Come Beloved
as a strong wind
blow
through my life
seperate
the wheat from the chaff
Help me
to love them both

the good
the bad
the everything
for it has brought me
Here
brought me
back
to You

Aid me
in letting go
of all this
stuff
these things
these strings
and attachments

So there might be room
for nothing else
but Love
among these boxes

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Last post for a while, we're off on a family road trip (for who knows how long) and will most likely be without internet. Massive love to you all xxx
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Kailashana2

Fri, 2012-05-18 20:27

Enjoy each other and see all those things most of us take for granted in our busy lives.

It's an amazing thing to see the Beloved in all that is.

~A

faerybeki

Fri, 2012-05-18 21:05

faerybeki's picture

Ahhh yes, we intend on embracing it all :) much love to you dear Anna xxx

'God turns you from one feeling to another
and teaches by means of opposites,
so that you will have two wings to fly,
not one.' (...Rumi)

author comment

believe

Sat, 2012-05-19 07:38

believe's picture

MMM This spells commitment to me,
I like the the analogy description of having to re-sort ones life to accommodate,
and let go other things from the past .

Nice one !

(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.