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Morning Pearls
morning pearls
By: now not off the track poet
the ecstasy expressed by rose buds
desires unfurling in the morning dew,
the lovers eyes
await for her silkiness true
and
caresses the sweetest lips
how I wish we all do
to express a pint of happiness
a burning desire
at the warmest mornings welcome.
I wasn't any poetic material,
but now dare to induce pearls of wisdom,
hope in a friendly way
you will continue to take
as you always did.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
weirdelf
Fri, 2012-04-20 02:31
wishy washy
demand what you need.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Fri, 2012-04-20 05:14
Washy washy
wishy...wishy
and this is my next
when Neopoet rules permit
till then here safe with you
You Are You
Have faith in yourself ...there is nothing beyond life and you ...as you are the maker of your destiny ... you are the you... the sun god made of you.... but alas you depend on the imagination... time has gifted to you... unknowing that you are the only entity ...
that friend is only you...
believe me there’s nothing beyond life...
no hubby... no wife... no father...no mom.... no siblings too...
none except you..
for you alone have to traverse...
the universe ...
yes friend all alone...
how I wish i could generate a positive thought
of uniqueness in you ...
that you are
only one of a kind that's
YOU...
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weirdelf
Fri, 2012-04-20 08:30
that's ok,
I value you, sometimes attack your, but you always intrique me,
much love
Jess
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Fri, 2012-04-20 11:36
Thanks... here's another gem out of many
do stay tuned in
kindness
you are free to dagger me
when i compose
tihs..
reverse it
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