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Win Or Lose,You Choose

NOBEL PRIZE WINNERS

One such winner
Had your kind
Of an idea
When he felt deprived

So he decided to work hard
And
Make him rich
And
Finally landed with a Nobel Prize
And
All the accompanied perks

But in his simple conclusive talk
He has amply clarified
Luck for success
Is very important,
A rich man’s son will be rich,
A poor mans poor,
But to over come ill luck
Don’t just sit
Try and earn a Nobel
Like me
And
If you can't get it
You will still be happy,
That you did try like me,
Not the Nobel guy,
But I, me lhlhlh

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Comments

Perhaps
wanted to dynamite
the mountains to till
but we humans
dynamite
to kill

Glad you read my poem
which time had so stilled

since long
twas perhaps
Gods will.

Please also do read
my poem on
IAN

loved

author comment

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cheers,
Jess
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