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Second Anniversary

Two years
Two hearts


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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
a couple of acrostics, written for my husband, in celebration of our wedding anniversary :)
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A sweet memory dropping down the page like a lovely little water colour painting.

Nordic cloud.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

a sweet memory indeed dear Ann, I like what you wrote about a 'lovely little watercolour' :) I hope there will be a large collection of these Anniversary acrostics to help us both remember, much love to you xxx

'God turns you from one feeling to another
and teaches by means of opposites,
so that you will have two wings to fly,
not one.' (...Rumi)

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Nice thoughts well written, hope you have many more years in nirvana. Regards Roscoe..

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

to use cotton
nice acrostics

happy anniversary for whenever it was
may you stay in your nirvana for forever xx
love judy

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

Lovely way to hold those two years wrapped up with Cotton.
Take care of you, Young Moonraker,
Yours in Exile, Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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