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The Fog

Submitted by faerybeki on Sat, 2012-03-17 20:23

There are times
still
when the fog
rolls in
and you can't see
for sheer
density

You forget
for a moment
that the light
doesn't dwell
somewhere outside
but breathes
from deep
within you

but that is ok

Being lost
in the fog
brings it's own
beauty

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Candlewitch

Sun, 2012-03-18 15:28

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You forget
for a moment
that the light
doesn't dwell
somewhere outside
but breathes
from deep
within you

WOW!!!

always, Cat

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faerybeki

Sun, 2012-03-18 17:58

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Hello :)
it's ok to forget.. and wonderful to remember, love to you Cat xxx

'God turns you from one feeling to another
and teaches by means of opposites,
so that you will have two wings to fly,
not one.' (...Rumi)

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Esker

Mon, 2012-03-19 08:12

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what intuition spoke of
guiding

overwhelmned till the site
becomes the vision
bright and soft
fulfilling focus

memories sometimes tricky
like a compass spinning
we rely on gifts
this lost momentum
like flying in a cloud

faerybeki

Mon, 2012-03-19 18:15

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More reliant than ever on gifts, from all directions, such as this comment is :)) Thank you xxx

'God turns you from one feeling to another
and teaches by means of opposites,
so that you will have two wings to fly,
not one.' (...Rumi)

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Cloudthings

Mon, 2012-03-19 23:08

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Home, my darling sister... straight to the heart.
xx

Cheers
Anni

My dear friend always told me "Water the seeds of joy first"

faerybeki

Sat, 2012-03-24 08:55

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:)) mmmm your heart, sister, what a beautiful place to be xxx

'God turns you from one feeling to another
and teaches by means of opposites,
so that you will have two wings to fly,
not one.' (...Rumi)

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