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Haiku #10

Submitted by brittle light on Tue, 2010-11-30 00:33

a confirmed recluse
his own shadow annoys him
living in the dark

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brittle light

Wed, 2010-12-01 01:23

brittle light's picture

I will use your suggestion."living in the dark"... much more fluid and Haiku-ish
I knew this numbering thing would confuse...I had decided to stop titleing haiku
and for some reason even I can't fathom, started with #7. I don't belive the order these are read is
relevent ...no sequence was intended

thanks for stopping by

Al

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Edevold

Sat, 2010-12-04 08:52

Edevold's picture

a nice image..... I have a friend who chainsawed down a tree across his driveway to keep visitors out during a vacation week.....

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