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Dawn...2012

Submitted by loved on Sat, 2011-12-31 16:06

A New Year 2012 dawns,
Ah!
As all poets around the world soar
On every site
In the heart of mankind

And

Loved, implores
That all well wishers, friends
As well as foes,
Shake hands,
As the Dawn of a New Year,
The last of the Mayan Calendar,
Sees the day of light,
As the sun rises today
And shall ever hence.

No man lives beyond an ordained life.
A limited span,
Human life
Seeds every moment
Some leave the planet,
The mundane world...
But life proceeds as ever before…
The Dawn of existence continues all the more,
Eternity is endless,
So are dawns
Friends, morn after morns….

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Sun, 2012-01-01 03:00

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A good write on the new year and its implications.
Yes it is Yenti the ghost of Neo past come to talk to you about your work LOL.
Have a lovely New Year young Bard and walk within the energies you have in that fertile mind of yours.
We can talk later, Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Sun, 2012-01-01 06:25

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The bard bows to you
for thinking so....

your so ordained bard
worth the pinch of salt
anon bard
bows with reverence to all...
loved

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scribbler

Sun, 2012-01-01 11:09

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I am sure of what will happen at end of2012........beginning of 2013. Happy new year.........stan

loved

Sun, 2012-01-01 13:28

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on the same grid
and
though parallels don't meet
we will
as eternity must also have a curve
if life where we survive has ...

SO HAPPY 2013 ...2013 NO ERROR PLEASE..
WELL IN ADVANCE
MEET YOU THEN TOO
IF TIME DOES
WILL

loved

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loved

Wed, 2012-01-04 23:54

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''WE ALL ARE JUST PASSERS BY
AS TIME PASSES US ALL BY''

loved

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