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ALIENS

Submitted by stargirl on Thu, 2011-12-29 13:56

It is an outer world of mysteries
possible alien life
are the legends true?
do these mysteries have only logical explinations?
do these strange other life forms live among us?
why don't we know the answers?
is area 51 area a real place with actual others unknown to us?
these can and will be answered.
if you believe in them.
THEY ARE HERE....

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scribbler

Sat, 2011-12-31 10:38

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I would have sworn that I already commented on this poem. All one has to do is look around to be convinced that aliens are among us and most of them are in Congress lol. You might want to review the area 51 line........stan

stargirl

Sat, 2011-12-31 17:25

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sorry and hello. i accidentally saved the poem twice i was in a rush and had to get to my next class so i typed the last few lines without noticing any mistakes with only thirty seconds remaining until the bell rang so sorry for the mistakes. funny comment about the congress . i thank you for the critism.

sincerely a new writer,
Stargirl

i just wanted to get some of my poems out into the world and see if anyone besides my family and friends like them so thumbs up if you like them

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