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ALIENS

Submitted by stargirl on Thu, 2011-12-29 13:56

It is an outer world of mysteries
possible alien life
are the legends true?
do these mysteries have only logical explinations?
do these strange other life forms live among us?
why don't we know the answers?
is area 51 area a real place with actual others unknown to us?
these can and will be answered.
if you believe in them.
THEY ARE HERE....

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sorry i'm not continuing the runaway files but this poem popped into my head just today so enjoy!!!
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emogothgirl

Fri, 2011-12-30 17:19

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i thought you would do a great job with the runaway files! stick to your word dudette!

anyways, it was a good idea. try rhyming, i think that would be more interesting.

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Fri, 2011-12-30 22:51

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There are many among us who if not alien ought to be lol. Might want to proof read the area 51 line..................stan

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