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Deleted Attitude
Ball breaker , heart taker
Urban slut, fuck that
Man eater, Micky taker,
Should know her place.
Hell no.
Foul mouth, hardened
Bitch, slag , bites back
Revenge, on the attack.
To all those who
Attempt to label
Her fuck that
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Hooded Stranger
Mon, 2010-12-06 06:27
Lou
Lou,
well you just rant away!
Great aggression!
HS
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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.
lou
Thu, 2010-12-02 17:56
Lol
I was going for the minimal approach.. lol
I had a poem posted on here earlier , and when I came back to update it, there was only half the poem on the page, so I deleted it.
I've added the poem again.
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
scribbler
Thu, 2010-12-02 20:41
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In the distant future when you cease to worry so about others' opinions, you might consider saying what you really mean...............lmao........scribbler
lou
Fri, 2010-12-03 00:11
Stan
I always say what I mean lol
This poem is not auto biographical, it is just a means to convey an attitude, that of the subject and the people who judge her. A work of fiction , created purely from the imagination.
Lou x
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
lou
Fri, 2010-12-03 11:43
Xena
thanks
lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!