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More Than Just A Dream
the graphics of the past always blur her way,
reverting to an illusion somehow part of the day.
yet i know she can make it and on the track she'll stay..
during the time the ghosts of memories find its time to play.
she was in the middle of two constant-changing worlds,
and it takes time for her to smile or at least make a forged,
wounds inside were like thorns killing with a monster's urge...
even silence is disturbing - puzzles,blanks..and words..
still she's here..free from what could be called nightmares
nights are just so as bright as the morning Earth..
don't forget to thank Him - the One who greatly cares,
He let and made you realize you still have other worth..
God helps people who help themselves,
wish you'll never stick between the shelves...
hold on your faith and follow your dreams,
and soon you'll see - it's not as impossible as it seems..
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the_fool
Sun, 2011-12-25 05:12
i did not realize
that this was a rhyming piece until the last S so kudos for that.
in 2nd S i'd change forged to either forgery or it forged
last S- does God wish, N wish or the reader wish?
and last line i'd erase a few words and make it-
'you'll see- as impossible as it seems'
might need a little work, but nice piece.
nullus anxietas
the_fool