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Entwined

Submitted by loved on Sat, 2011-12-24 10:26

Some humor aroused
In an otherwise
mundane audience...

Penisculey ...vaginesque poetry
lockingly, loffoblle, ,spermotically
Horgasmically too
Well done can I say
Friendson to you...

Creativity at is maxshimum
Shakespeare shuvverring…
In the beneath colde

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

weirdelf

Sat, 2011-12-24 15:07

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You nailed me here,
Indeed Shakespeare would have felt the colde, while he was busy making up the many other words he contributed to our language.
kudos.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
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loved

Sat, 2011-12-24 22:50

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And thanks
Have a goodeiest day...
today and from today.

loved

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