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Just wonder full...

How I wish I could benefit too,
Just by reading you,
Why have you taken?
A long spell to return

"Where [is] all the midnight oil
[That] you [burned]?"

In alleys and valleys,
Entwined, intermixed with joys and sorrows,
But whatever may have been your plight
Morrow after morrow,
It must have added to your strength
From which I dare to borrow
And your footsteps follow

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Free verse
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I have over ruled my self
as your interest in my poetry

overwhelms me

perhaps tis the maiden one ,
you have read

loved

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