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days later

Submitted by Victorclaude on Mon, 2011-01-10 07:14

days later

days later they
found me.

I said I
would never
do it
again,
but I get
to edit.

the staff
of life is not
bread,
it is fear,

but I
get
to edit,

my
dear.

Editing stage: 
Not actively editing

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the_fool

Wed, 2011-12-14 22:53

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i think i got most of it. its a little bumpy for me. i think the lines may be too short.

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