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redemption?
...from what?
I am a man
and if you say "in the image of god"
I say "I am that I am"
repentence?
...for what?
my will is free
where is the freedom in guilt?
awareness understands
the predicaments of man
newer mind does not demand
reparation from the old
no acts of contrition shall be imposed
the only sin is sorrow
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scribbler
Wed, 2011-12-14 07:47
hello
Like the form and texture of this message. It might read with more power with line breaks after each question mark....................stan