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what where

what where

hour to hour
day to day
on and on
we go
to where sometimes
where
isn’t where it
should be

not really lost
just haven’t found
what where is.

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

I like it. eccentrically cool minimalism.

Al

Well get there! where's there? Excellent I enjoyed reading this clever little poem.

Love Mand xxxxx

.....and if it was where it should be would we know what it was?

Lori

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