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what where
what where
hour to hour
day to day
on and on
we go
to where sometimes
where
isn’t where it
should be
not really lost
just haven’t found
what where is.
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
brittle light
Thu, 2010-12-02 01:20
I like it. eccentrically
I like it. eccentrically cool minimalism.
Al
mand
Thu, 2010-12-02 05:16
Witty!!
Well get there! where's there? Excellent I enjoyed reading this clever little poem.
Love Mand xxxxx
Loreli
Thu, 2010-12-02 09:13
LOL
.....and if it was where it should be would we know what it was?
Lori