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An Intermittent Rule of Thumbs
Please try and sever all your stupid ties
because she's so not into, you!
A heart that's died,
can't be denied,
it might be that it's your "cue"!
~
It's never going to get easier
so keep your cards close to the vest.
Put away that cross,
and start hitting the "sauce",
you can't beat 'em, so join the rest!
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Direction):
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Last few words:
It was a 10 line, "nonsense" contest. This poem received an honorable mention.
Editing stage:
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Comments
docmaverick
Sun, 2011-12-04 18:34
Thanx, Ian....
...just me, setting the "bar" a little lower with each write.
doc.
Neopoet is "newtriffic" !
...from the heart, or a reasonable faxcimile;
david a. goodwin #{:>{)} @==
Kailashana2
Sat, 2011-12-03 09:16
The deck is stacked.
The deck is stacked.
Nonsense you say?
I wonder what the winning poem was if your's was honorable mention.
~A
docmaverick
Sun, 2011-12-04 18:38
Ah yes, dear ~A....
...it's the wonder of poetry that keeps us poets....guessing. Not sure what poem won, but I'll look that up.
doc.
Neopoet is "newtriffic" !
...from the heart, or a reasonable faxcimile;
david a. goodwin #{:>{)} @==
scribbler
Sun, 2011-12-04 20:21
Hey Doc
Keep such "NONSENSE " coming lol............stan