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There are fairies at the bottom of my garden
There are Fairies at the bottom of my garden
And they visit every evening, for a dance
They are lovely to behold and very welcome
I just wish they didn’t trample on my plants
Their favourite one appears to be the Salsa
They do it with such style and aplomb
Much better than last week when they were jivin’
It appeared they’d hit the garden with a bomb
So I do believe in Fairies, ‘cos I’ve seen them
And every night I watch them, in a trance
They are graceful and delightful and enchanting
Oi, Tinkerbell, get off my bloomin’ plants
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weirdelf
Sun, 2011-11-27 08:13
Ill behaved fairies!
Something in your garden must be fermenting causing intoxication
cheers,
Jess
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shazbat
Mon, 2011-11-28 14:03
It could be that the little
It could be that the little buggers are hitting the mushrooms again.
John
weirdelf
Mon, 2011-11-28 15:22
Ill behaved fairies!
Ill behaved fairies!
Something in the action
in your garden must be fermenting,
causing intoxication
new
It could be that the little
It could be that the little buggers
are hitting the mushrooms again.
.
.
.
cheers,
Jess
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'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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weirdelf
Thu, 2011-12-01 08:49
hoped you might take my hint and continue this
as a collaborative poem.
cheers,
Jess
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shazbat
Thu, 2011-12-01 15:12
Sorry Jess, haven't been
Sorry Jess, haven't been about much this week. Try this on for size, see what you think.
It could be the little buggers
are hitting the mushrooms again
They’re certainly quite unusual
They must be a magical strain
There’s Puck, the rotten devil
Obnoxious little git
He’s at the well with Tinkerbell
Who’s taking off her kit
Genuine Breath
Thu, 2011-12-01 02:55
Nice verse
and a theme. :)
http://genuinebreath.yolasite.com/
shazbat
Thu, 2011-12-01 15:14
Thank you very kindly, I'm
Thank you very kindly, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
John