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Apologies Apologies

Nothing changes with hateful birds
apologies, apologies 

The cold-hearted fish with much to say
nothing constructive

Always condemning finding fault with every thought
with one you claimed to love and cherish
apologies apologies

All the money in the world, or
romantic overtones can make the pain any less painful 
like a lion in the bush ready to strike, it still rocks the senses
apologies apologies

You wonder why my heart is as a stone
unfeeling, uncaring, unwilling to feel emotions for you
Non-discerning your cries of victimizing rejection
apologies apologies I have none to give you
as yours are insincere anyway

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Comments

A very strong and emotional write.

All the money in the world, or
romantic overtones can make the pain any less painful
like a lion in the bush ready to strike, it still rocks the senses
apologies apologies

always, Cat

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