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Apologies Apologies
Nothing changes with hateful birds
apologies, apologies
The cold-hearted fish with much to say
nothing constructive
Always condemning finding fault with every thought
with one you claimed to love and cherish
apologies apologies
All the money in the world, or
romantic overtones can make the pain any less painful
like a lion in the bush ready to strike, it still rocks the senses
apologies apologies
You wonder why my heart is as a stone
unfeeling, uncaring, unwilling to feel emotions for you
Non-discerning your cries of victimizing rejection
apologies apologies I have none to give you
as yours are insincere anyway
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Comments
Candlewitch
Mon, 2011-11-21 11:03
Hello Barbara,
A very strong and emotional write.
All the money in the world, or
romantic overtones can make the pain any less painful
like a lion in the bush ready to strike, it still rocks the senses
apologies apologies
always, Cat
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