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Completely original
I grasp my cow, it's tiny scow
so when we think, despite the sink
you grow your toes, in desperate throes
and try to make a disk of it
If when we turn, without a burn
and tackle every scullery
we skip on vile skullduggery
and that's a daisy's mis-turn
I grab your foot, without a thought
and try to make it relevant
so give up verse, and then traverse
Some broken glass,
and raise an undead revenant
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Candlewitch
Mon, 2011-11-21 10:56
Hi Jess,
I did enjoy your pure nonsense poem, and found it humerous! Thanks for the smiles.
always, Cat
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Esker
Sat, 2015-01-03 23:11
all ready to walk the hot coals!
Like the word flow here!
delightful light
Thank You!
weirdelf
Sun, 2015-01-04 04:37
ta, Cat and Esker
I was inspired by Stephen Fry's doco "World of Words" wherein he demonstrates that it is possible to write passages of completely correct English that have almost certainly never ever been written or uttered before.
cheers,
Jess
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Lonnie
Sun, 2015-01-04 07:40
Hey Jess
Not my cup of napalm, but I would be slated to be castrated, doused in honey, and placed naked over a hill of fire ants if I did not acknowledge the talent here! Very original indeed!
weirdelf
Sun, 2015-01-04 14:37
and likewise various and sundry tortures and discomforts
if I did not acknowledge the vividity of your comment,
ta mate
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry