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Supplement
Supplement
You are the percipient of I
understanding
all things relevant
in my
leanings
towards all
meaning
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Do you get my drift.
Editing stage:
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Comments
Candlewitch
Fri, 2011-11-04 11:34
Hello,
Your poem gives food for thought!
always, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Roscoe Lane
Sun, 2011-11-06 04:41
Thank you,
Thank you, good of you to comment. Love Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
author commentRoscoe Lane
Sun, 2011-11-06 05:57
Thank you,
Thank you we all need our supplements, one way or another. Love Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
author commentRoscoe Lane
Sun, 2011-11-06 05:59
Thank you,
Thank you Lonnie always glad to see your comments. Regards Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
author commentloved
Sat, 2011-11-05 13:07
classic
just classic
in brevity
so much conveyed
loved
Roscoe Lane
Sun, 2011-11-06 06:02
Good,
Good of you to comment my friend. Regards Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
author commentRoscoe Lane
Sun, 2011-11-06 06:02
Good,
Good of you to comment my friend. Regards Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
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