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Kind of Lingers
The feeling
kind of lingers
kinda lingers
kindalingus
oh yes that feeling
cindalingas
cinallingas
cunnilingus
oh yes!
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
shazbat made me do it.
Editing stage:
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Comments
Candlewitch
Thu, 2011-11-03 11:36
Dear Jess,
Love the way you play with the words. Very slick and (cunning) Brought a smile to me and a chuckle.
always, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Kailashana2
Thu, 2011-11-03 12:43
Yeah, well I knew you'd take
Yeah, well I knew you'd take the master bait.
;-)
~A
weirdelf
Thu, 2011-11-03 21:32
ta Cat, Anna
who could resist it?
cheers,
Jess
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loved
Fri, 2011-11-04 10:04
I am your fan
so I guessed the last word
what it would be
And
was the cunning- in -the -less
thatI see your name in my fans list
astonishes me
hope you really mean it
thanks to you
for your oceanic heart
in the deserts of life
i shall remember thee
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weirdelf
Fri, 2011-11-04 10:10
oh yes, of course,
you do produce some gems.
Thankyou
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Fri, 2011-11-04 10:14
Only a gemsmith....
can evaluate
a gem
thank you
for your speediest response
and
teaching me
what I ought to have known
first is no caps
i salute you though
with a cap on...
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