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For Cat

Abundant grace  
Transfused with love and kindness  
You offer to all

Hold high the weapon of right
Smite what is wrong.
A tender shield held in defence against hate

Stand in defiance 
Kick malevolence
into oblivion 

Talent and artistry
Remain

Last few words: 
The Doom sisters rock !!!! Love you lou
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Stated with elegance, love and eloquence, Lou.

cheers,
Jess
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Thank you,

I can't stand to think that Cat has been victimised in this way.

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Spot on here with this one

Hold high the weapon of right
Smite what is wrong.
A tender shield held in defence against hate

Thank you.

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Well done

tr

A rekindled faith - Dancing in the Light

thank you i'm pleased that you liked it.

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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thank you, i wish we could stop who ever it is who has attacked Cat, i hate the fact that she has been driven away.

love lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Lou,

Spot on. Perfect!

HS

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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.

thanks i'm glad you like it

cheers

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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I can only see the good that has come from this madness. I know that when the hurt hurts it hurts like hell and it feels as though it will never pass, but with all the folks who have cared enough to comment, friends and friends' poems such as this eloquent and elegant poem Lou wrote for you, it's proof positive that unkindness and desperate lies to gain a foothold will never ever *win*, not for long anyway except for the shock of it happening..

Love will triumph!

~A

very true.

thank you

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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thank you,

I think it's a shame what's happening.

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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I came here it catch up on your writing to see and comment on all I have missed. And I find this gem of love and understanding! What a pleasant and wonderful surprise!!! Thank you!!!

All I can say, in my defence for not getting here sooner, is; I have been busy with getting the Book of Styx and Book of Styx II ready for publication. And of course AEC business. So forgive me for not being here sooner, please? I love and appreciate every word that you have so carefully and lovingly crafted. Big (((Hugs)))

Love, Cat

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love you

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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thats fine

thanks

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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I love this poem a lot, that was an amazing write, I enjoyed it. !!!!!

thank you very much.

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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