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Soldier of freedom

Unsolicited garbage spilled 
Upon the battle field
Weapons formulated to destroy
Obliterate all meaning 

Swagger and bluff 
you entered the arena
ready for war
Arrogance unyielding

Opposition shielded  
In the trenches shooting back 
Snipers ready to attack
Soldiers of freedom 

Battle commences individualism 
Is our weapon 
Nonconformity our armour 
Liberty our choice

Last few words: 
Excuse lack of punctuation and poor lay out for now please , I will come back to that Lol!! Thank you
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No need for excuses it's great, and the last verse nails it. Terrific write . Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

Thank you very much

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Lou,

dreadful use of punctuation and layout is pants!

LOL!

HS

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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.

Cheeky Bugger !!!

LMAO!!

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Spot On

Warrior Lou!!

Great writing here I like it

Mona
xox

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