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Humor in writing workshop- first attempt - Booze Hound

Submitted by lou on Mon, 2011-10-10 00:48

There is an old lush named Booze Hound
When attempting to walk hits the ground
Then pukes and he burps
He goes through the works
causing havoc all the way round 

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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lou

Mon, 2011-10-10 08:46

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Thank you, i have taken your advise.

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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