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Distant Planes Of Dreams(co-write w/Cat in chat)
On many a cold night
My mind will remember
Your soft,smiling eyes
And I cry
To the shadows
For release
From the sadness of
Emotions gone wild
But not forgotten
Your deep, smokey voice
Calls to me
From across the sea
When will we meet
On distant planes
Of joyous expectation
Fulfilling a dream
Of getting lost
Within your sighs
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
This was written by Candlewitch and China Blue during Friday nights chat session
Editing stage:
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Comments
raj
Fri, 2011-10-07 23:34
Chrys
i will read this again at leisure to absorb its essence...
raj (sublime_ocean)
magics02
Sat, 2011-10-08 00:25
I will do the same
Ladies
Somehow this poem seems to be written about one I am praying for at this time. I will revisit ladies and great duet by you both.
Love and Hugs
Mona
xox
lou
Sat, 2011-10-08 05:02
Bloody Hell
well done i think this a beautiful, emotional expression of how it feels to long for the one you love.
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
lou
Sat, 2011-10-08 20:16
Hi
It was fun, we should have another ladies night sans men LOL!!!
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
Candlewitch
Sun, 2011-10-09 10:43
Thanks everyone,
Chrys is equally easy to write with. I had a great time, but next chat I think we should leave the raspberry sauce off the pizza!
Love, Cat
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lou
Mon, 2011-10-10 03:22
LOL
The sausage didn't help
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
Candlewitch
Mon, 2011-12-26 09:50
Hey Chrys!!!
We are just brilliant together! LOL! It is so good to see you!!!
Love, Cat
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China Blue
Tue, 2012-01-03 14:34
Cat
We are, aren't we
thanks
Chrys
Chrys
Let your mercy spill on all these burning hearts in hell(Leonard Cohen)