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You Pulled A fast One

You Pulled A fast One

You sent shivers down many a spine
Including Shirley and mine
We were worried
All this while,
As you hadn't commented
In your own style

Though I am aware
You have to be read three
Is to one
Maybe none
But Stan don’t make us run,
Surgery is no fun,
Life has to be lived well
Ere we all go to the knell,
I won't say heaven or hell,
As in both
Through life's sojourn
Here alone we dwell.

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I never intended my poem to be taken as more than a write of fiction. i guess I'll be careful to state that a poem is fiction if I ever write such again 'cause I Don't want to cause friends anxiety........................stan

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WORRY
I am still alive not dead
HOPEFULLY

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LOVE is just a four letter word
we all say it
but few mean it
thanks friend
long time no see.
glad u do remember me

and write more fiction not friction will ye?.

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I am lost

what it it that was
written that
made so much
of another darn
friction..alas

laughing out loud

Mona

u smile and that makes my day
thanks friend....MONA

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