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faded light
The night sky
draws ink from clouds
drifting through
faded light
I am blown away
by empty spaces
falling leaves
and messengers
dressed like angels
with moonlight halos.
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Comments
magics02
Mon, 2011-10-03 00:26
Insightful
Just love it. Thats all I can say.
Mona
xox
themoonman
Mon, 2011-10-03 05:37
Anna ...
abstract, but I love it! Only one suggestion I'd
make, "moonlit", just an idea.
Candlewitch
Mon, 2011-10-03 11:11
Dear Anna,
A pensive mood... I like the imagery!
always, Cat
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Nordic cloud
Tue, 2011-10-04 14:02
Full of wonder
Love Ann.
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.