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Life is a Thunderbolt
I went from fantastic high
to tragic low
happy state of being
to sad state of existence
that's life,
take it as it comes
or leave it as it is
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weirdelf
Wed, 2011-09-28 04:22
Or take it in both hands
entwine your legs around it
and ride it to the end!
I understand this more than you can know.
cheers,
Jess
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Barbara Writes
Wed, 2011-09-28 04:32
thanks for the advice
knowing how is the best understanding
i will;l certainly do that
hope the world is ready for a crazy person like me
there is no in between for me. i tend to be on way extreme or the other extreme.
hehee
many find me problematic because i am true to what i feel and think
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weirdelf
Wed, 2011-09-28 04:52
you and me both, darlin'
and no, the world will never be ready for us, or it wouldn't need poets! [grins]
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Barbara Writes
Wed, 2011-09-28 05:20
true that
finding Neopoet and learning to write better poetry is the best thing i could have come across. i can write that which i can't talk about effectively or express accurately.
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magics02
Wed, 2011-09-28 12:20
Truth
Barb
Is it Life is a Thunderbolt or Like a Thunderbolt in your title here. You know me by now I am stickler for little tweaks:)
life,
take it as it comes
or leave it as it is
You got that right. And now my hour is up for Neopoet and on with life as it is..one day at a time.
Smiles
Mona
Barbara Writes
Thu, 2011-09-29 04:15
thanks Mona
you are right about the title. i only just notice the error as i saw it on the updates. thanks i appreciate your right on comment
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