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I shall not be gone for long

I shall not be gone for long
but where I now belong
is far, far forlorn
sooner than later
I may be gone

But

hope to return
with Love to all
from Loved Anon...

I now reside
In a different world
they call paradice,
not paradise
but
where their is no ice,
only infested by mice.

None-the-less
life here is also very nice.

I miss you all too.
With love to all
who still loved Loved...

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We might leave for a while
but we all come back
to share a smile..

Mona

Lost memory

Who are you they ask,
silently,
with a choked voice,
I reply
‘tis I,
yeah, me...
you once knew
Loved.

They stare into my eyes and ask
all over again
who?
Loved?

loved

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Return to us soon.

always, Cat

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But from the darkened wilderness of time
i shall have to wait
albeit
yet return i shall though may be late
but I shall continue to hope
my friends will wait.
loved

loved

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Are you still having trouble getting back on? If so, I suggest you write to Hooded Stranger, or Andrew for help. Miss you!

always, Cat

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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

was slighly indisposed and busy in meditation
shall revert asap
regards all well wishers

loved

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Lost memory

Who are you they ask,
silently,
with a choked voice,
I reply
‘tis I,
yeah, me...
you once knew
Loved.

They stare into my eyes and ask
all over again
who?
Loved?

loved

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