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Tundra
a barren tundra
far far away from it all
there is nothing here
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Haiku
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weirdelf
Mon, 2011-09-12 02:59
nice one
evokes with perfect subtlety a desolation of mind and experience, not just place.
cheers,
Jess
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IKnowNoBox
Mon, 2011-09-12 14:34
Thank you,
In ink,
David
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