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You're the reason

YOU’RE THE REASON

You’re the reason I’m still single
The reason I’ll never marry
And why I carry
Nitroglycerine in my pocket
I don't miss your hugs and kisses
And don't want you for my Mrs

You seem so sweet and girly
But You're the reason men die early
And want to

So my honey
I don’t need your love or money
Untie the ropes that bind me
And let me out the door

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Joe

Geremia

Maestro

I am laughing stock and barrel. Really good one tonight. I needed that!!

Night to you friend. Good job. Still lmao

Mona
xoxo

I needed to write this :)

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It feels too good to get it out I know what you mean my friend

needed to read this. being married makes it hard to write this though it is exactly how i feel dealing with my situation.

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When the pain becomes stronger than the fear, t s then you teave a bad situation And if anyone makes you feel less than who you are, rrun like hell!.

Joe

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No excuses or plaintive submissive whinging.

cheers,
Jess
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Geez, Jess, can't I whine just a little bit?

I always look for yur feedback,'

Thanks, buddy

Joe

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"No excuses or plaintive submissive whinging."?
No, I said you are writing real poetry.

My only complaint with your poetry is that you have so much talent that you coulld use it more.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

I am good ,aen't I ? :)

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Never doubt it.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

Sometimes I do...but then I snap out of it lol

see my new blog.

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