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What A Way To Go!
to tumble to the end
like a child at play
down a soft grassy glen
on a sunshiny day
hugging the ground
spilling with laughter
ingratiating my bound
to the ditch of hereafter
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Timbo
Thu, 2011-08-18 10:04
loved it ! Well done. Tim
loved it ! Well done.
Tim
brittle light
Fri, 2011-08-19 15:03
thanks, once again, for your
thanks, once again, for your gracious comment
Al
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