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How Goes Your Quest?
I am a plain man
simple in wants and needs
slight of stature and vision
small pieces
seamlessly woven together
a creature
unique
individual
me
sometimes happy
with many attending joys
at times sad
oh! so sad
of which nothing will be said here
all of me
experienced
in parts
at different times
I don't pretend to know anything
although sometimes I think
it is just this smallness that allows
a simple, yet elegant acceptence
of my state of being
exactly as it is
how goes your quest?
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Candlewitch
Tue, 2011-08-02 10:41
Hello BL,
An interesting summation of all the parts! My quest is ongoing, sometimes with impatience.
always, Cat
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brittle light
Mon, 2011-08-15 15:30
Hello to you Cat
complexity seems to disappear in the "now moment"....a simpleton sometimes has the advantage!
thank you for your thoughts
Al
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