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Slippery Slope
On the Crystal slide
anyone can ride
if your calloused enough
for the lines that follow
I'll never get my fill
and can taste it still
one look inside
other girls forgotten
Yum Yum sweet Crystal's sex
that overly addictive sticky mess
her fine red hair and creamy skin
watch out boys, my turn again
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Comments
themoonman
Tue, 2011-07-19 09:35
Hiya Chrys ...
We are all doing ok, hope all is well there too.
yes, this has that juvenile side I can't seem to shake from ...
and hope I never do.
thanks
author commentBonitaj
Thu, 2011-07-14 12:48
Hey there Old Boy (said in a Cambridge accent;)
Sorry I came late to this one. Drawn in by Philosophical Nature of the title. You didn't disappoint!
Isn't temptation, particularly of the carnal variety, nearly always a slippery slope?
Nicely captured!
Boni
Bonitaj
themoonman
Tue, 2011-07-19 09:37
Carnal desires ...
we all have them, and they are never as simple as just satisfying
the urge, it always returns, until it doesn't, by then, I hope to be dead.
author commentloved
Thu, 2011-07-14 14:03
you are undoubtedly wonderful
if only i had followed you
on my part ,
its been blunderful
My Honour
It’s a signal honour,
Whenever you visit my leaf,
It helps me turn,
A new leaf,
In my life
Its my belief..
loved
themoonman
Tue, 2011-07-19 09:39
Loved ...
our leaves are intertwined, whether we want it or not.
author commentloved
Thu, 2011-07-21 21:47
pardon my ignorance for not being able to
evaluate your find
intertwined....
and
do wish to you remind,
you are foremost
in my mind ,
as i inacted with you initially
the most
on Neopoet ,
you are my best
first and foremost
host,....
loved