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analogy
when you stare at a dim star
it vanishes
then you see it
when you look away
it was an analogy waiting to happen
i left it too long
autumn or sunlight or
long shadows, does that help?
how about hawks, do you know now?
what i want to tell you
can only be said by
avoiding the subject
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Free verse
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Kailashana2
Mon, 2011-07-11 07:06
;-)
;-)
a-mazing stuff this analogy.
~A