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Naive Or Unassuming!

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Naïve or Unassuming!

A great deal
For your everlasting and solid support
As always,
albeit I impose positivity
In all human beings
I at times portray a default
though it may just be
An act of lack of wisdom

And

As they always said
Naivety meaning stupidity
but I learned as time lapsed
ere I really collapsed
I became unassuming
Slightly a shade better
Than being gloomy

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Naïve idiot means Unassuming!

Thanks
A great deal
For your everlasting and solid support
As always
Albeit
I impose positivity
In all human beings
I at times I do portray a default
Though it may just be
An act of lack of wisdom
I thought

And

As they always said
Naivety
Really meaning
Stupidity

But I learned
As time lapsed
Ere
I really collapsed

I became unassuming
Slightly a shade better
Than being a subject
Only worth consuming!
Blasphemy crafted irony!

loved

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Naïve idiot means Unassuming!

Thanks
A great deal
For your everlasting and solid support
As always
Albeit
I impose positivity
In all human beings
I at times I do portray a default
Though it may just be
An act of lack of wisdom
I thought

And

As they always said
Naivety
Really meaning
Stupidity

But I learned
As time lapsed
Ere
I really collapsed

I became unassuming
Slightly a shade better
Than being a subject
Only worth consuming!
Blasphemy crafted irony!

loved

author comment

There are many who would prefer being overlooked rather than risking ridicule for their opinions. You stated this very well in your poem......scribbler

am glad to read ur views
thannks

loved

author comment

It is a fine line we tread. We become more proficient at it with age.

Love Mand xxxxxxxxxxxxx

thanks,
mine,
you command!

loved

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