Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

London Is Calling!

Submitted by loved on Sun, 2010-11-21 01:59

London Is Calling!

Hello all aboard
This is Londoner poet calling
Attention all Londoners
Shirley Harrison is
about to be landing

Unfurl your masks
And
besides her stand
Give a bouquet
or a garland in her hand
All Londoners now stand
Give a standing ovation
To dear Shirley

Who is this Neopoet?
Well known too!
Arrives now early
Welcomes
London to thee
Dear Shirley
Can in the din
You hear Me.?

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

loved

Sun, 2010-11-21 08:54

loved's picture

typo
NEOPOETS APPARENTLY
SHALL AMEND
THANKS SEREN

loved

author comment

loved

Mon, 2010-11-22 11:30

loved's picture

you loved it
from loved

loved

author comment

loved

Mon, 2010-11-22 17:14

loved's picture

My PLeasure

the poem has been gifted to you
please do
what ever you would like to
tis urs
from friend loved
my regards
to all ur family too
what a lovely person
they all have in you
shirley i now envy uuuuuuuuuu
joking of course
tis my way so true.

loved

author comment

Victorclaude

Tue, 2010-11-23 12:53

Victorclaude's picture

Loved,

This is a very nice poem for that traveling young lady. We wish her all a safe journey and a good time while in her London!!

Victor

"When a pickpocket meets a holy man all he sees are his pockets."

Unknown (at least to me)

loved

Tue, 2010-11-23 14:05

loved's picture

do u think

i shall make it

to the

VICTORY STAND !!!!
(HAHAHAHAA)

of poets

i'm told
i'm near
but i fear !

loved

author comment
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.