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redesigning life
we have persevered
along stormy paths
felt the crunch
of indecision underfoot
seen wonders bloom
a kaleidoscope of color
but this is. . .
the summer of change
against a backdrop of clear azure skies
we have embraced winter's choice
released uncertainty on a breeze
watched the beginning of another life
amble along a walkway toward tomorrow
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CCfire
Wed, 2011-06-15 07:42
*checks to see if Theo
*checks to see if Theo followed...no? Ok All clear...lol...I like the fact you actually wrote something at last!! :P
I can sense the wanderlust returning but it's been there a while now..*hugs*
Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche
49reasons
Tue, 2011-06-21 08:47
wanderlust
Yes, wanderlust has always been there but I keep it well hidden for the most part. *hug*
~Juls~
"While I'm writing, I'm far away;
and when I come back, I've gone."
— Pablo Neruda
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