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The Wine
My mind said no
Because of the wine
My body said go
Influence by the wine
I couldn't say no
Now I'm in a bind
My head is spinning
I can't say no
So you're winning
You scored a home run
I was out
Now We're done
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Barbara Writes
Fri, 2011-06-10 23:09
Ian
I checked out your link and the books title and picture cover is beautiful
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Barbara Writes
Fri, 2011-06-10 14:32
Hahaha
Thanks for the comment LOl
Glad it worked well
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scribbler
Fri, 2011-06-10 22:53
Hi Barb
Next time you're up this way, drop in for a cup of wine lol...........stan
Barbara Writes
Fri, 2011-06-10 23:03
Hahahahaha Stan lol
You made my sad night a little brighter
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