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darkest night

Submitted by Victorclaude on Sun, 2010-11-21 08:31

inside each melody --
fragrant spark
playing round us

incandesces everything
at once

on light beams, songs
for their own pleasure play

desideratum's designedly
desiring desist of
insanity's mare of night

melodies play on
nonetheless, so there will
be light in darkest night.

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Free verse
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Victorclaude

Sun, 2010-11-21 09:46

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As always, thank you, Shirley.

Love,

Victor

"When a pickpocket meets a holy man all he sees are his pockets."

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Bonitaj

Sun, 2010-11-21 11:14

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I really liked this theme and how you brought it to unexpected fruition in the last stanza!
melodies play on
nonetheless, so there will
be light in darkest night.

Regards

Bonitaj

Victorclaude

Sun, 2010-11-21 13:26

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Bonitaj,

Thank you very much.

Victor

"When a pickpocket meets a holy man all he sees are his pockets."

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