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BREAK OF LINES

I broke the break
the bond
this weakness

youve flooded
me where I dwell
but I can swim

and well

and My Mermaid
guide will smile

so I set you down
with the greatest respect
you glittering phrase
your thick upset

and bravely weakly
find my strengths
in surrendering

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Free verse
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about something im working on
and trying to get a grip upon
(wont mention booze opps)

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