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insane

Submitted by Victorclaude on Wed, 2010-11-17 04:44

life’s chances
are dances danced
in some square,

onlookers watching,
even their stare,
sees us quite
plainly,
see us
quite plain
in life’s
dancing quiet --

altogether
insane.

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Victorclaude

Fri, 2010-11-19 16:21

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Thank you, Shirley~!

Love,

Victor

"When a pickpocket meets a holy man all he sees are his pockets."

Unknown (at least to me)

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weirdelf

Fri, 2015-01-02 01:40

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