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Two, Six syllable Lines
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opinion speaks loudly
wisdom bites off its tongue
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
judyanne
Thu, 2011-05-12 06:09
lol
what do you want al?
blood everywhere clogging up all our keyboards?
seriously
a clever write
love judy
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
brittle light
Thu, 2011-05-12 14:00
hello Judy
thanks...minimalism, or more correctly, very short pieces can be fun...if they work as conceived
glad to see you back on campus
Al
author commentbrittle light
Thu, 2011-05-12 13:51
only in demented cartoons..
only in demented cartoons...and in one of my nonsensical poems!
Al
author commentscribbler
Thu, 2011-05-12 22:39
Mnfe
Ori A it i onge fff. Translation: Sorry, I bit my tongue off lmao..........stan