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UNIQUENESS OF ONES SOUL!

Uniqueness of Ones Soul

I ain’t quite sure
What is a real soul?
All I am aware is
A man is fully whole,
If he has an active heart
A rife, brain, not only garbage
It has intelligence
Then the heart pumps
Blood into its periphery
Feeds it only from outside
As only pulp and electrical
Neuron guided senses
Reside magnetically
And
Majestically inside

Then as a child is born,
The palpitation
Of the woman’s heart,
Synchronises with the child’s own
As a unique new entity emerges
The new born heart also surges
Then takes itself on all of its own,
I call it flickering of a crystal
Vibrational too,
Perhaps you may call it a soul
If that actually thrills you,

Hope I have wilfully
Ah! Seemingly
Captured the uniqueness of one,
Your soul
For
I as a person
Is one who’ll vanish?
As does the heart beat
As you say
Of course your very unique soul

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More than a beautiful poem
its your lovely and beautiful mind
that you encourage
one of a kind
albeit some day
a mini shakingspeare
i may be ,
but then where you
and
i shall be
the world will then have to see,
wait at the corners of eternity ,
perhaps only then we shall meet
and
in the universe
of the solar sun of poetry
bask shall we

neither you will hear ,
nor will i ,
but poetically bound
we shall ly/lay!
whichever may!

loved

author comment

Just one question, my Be-loved...
do you fly on the wings of today?
the seat of your pants into the creases
of the 'morrow?
do you hover above?

~

i am a clipped bird in the summer of today the spring of yesterday and the autumn of tommorrow and winter all through its way i am just a BELOVED ONE IF YOU SAY Kailashna its so kind that you do come once in a way i salute you today for the springs you give me as beloved as beloved i shall always for ever be and so i thank thee x3times please say after me .

Wingless Angel!
I have no wings
I am a clipped bird,
In the summer of today,
The spring of yesterday,
And
The autumn of tomorrow
Ah! The winter all through its way

I am just a BELOVED
ONE IF YOU SAY,
Kailashana
It’s so kind that you do come
Once in a way,
I salute you today,
For the springs you give me,
As beloved
As beloved I shall always
For ever be
And
So I thank thee x3times
Please repeat after me.

loved

author comment

Uniqueness of Ones Soul

I ain’t quite sure
What is a real soul?
All I am aware is
A man is fully whole,
If he has an active heart
A rife, brain, not only garbage
It has intelligence
Then the heart pumps
Blood into its periphery
Feeds it only from outside
As only pulp and electrical
Neuron guided senses
Reside magnetically
And
Majestically inside

Then as a child is born,
The palpitation
Of the woman’s heart,
Synchronises with the child’s own
As a unique new entity emerges
The new born heart also surges
Then takes itself on all of its own,
I call it flickering of a crystal
Vibrational too,
Perhaps you may call it a soul
If that actually thrills you,

Hope I have wilfully
Ah! Seemingly
Captured the uniqueness of one,
Your soul
For
I as a person
Is one who’ll vanish?
As does the heart beat
As you say
Of course your very unique soul

i am a clipped bird in the summer of today the spring of yesterday and the autumn of tommorrow and winter all through its way i am just a BELOVED ONE IF YOU SAY Kailashna its so kind that you do come once in a way i salute you today for the springs you give me as beloved as beloved i shall always for ever be and so i thank thee x3times please say after me .

Wingless Angel!
I have no wings
I am a clipped bird,
In the summer of today,
The spring of yesterday,
And
The autumn of tomorrow
Ah! The winter all through its way

I am just a BELOVED
ONE IF YOU SAY,
Kailashana
It’s so kind that you do come
Once in a way,
I salute you today,
For the springs you give me,
As beloved
As beloved I shall always
For ever be
And
So I thank thee x3times
Please repeat after me.

More than a beautiful poem
its your lovely and beautiful mind
that you encourage
one of a kind
albeit some day
a mini shakingspeare
i may be ,
but then where you
and
i shall be
the world will then have to see,
wait at the corners of eternity ,
perhaps only then we shall meet
and
in the universe
of the solar sun of poetry
bask shall we

neither you will hear ,
nor will i ,
but poetically bound
we shall ly/lay!
whichever may!

loved

author comment
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