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RHYKU
The screen's fading glow
is like memories dissipating
as I rise and finally go
to my warm bed awaiting
Rhyku- a new,I think, form similar to Haiku in which brevity in form is used but in which at Least 2 lines contain rhyme.Does not matter which 2. Limitation in number of lines is 3 minimum and 4 maximum and length of each line to not exceed 7 words. Give it a try and see if you like it lol...............stan
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Comments
lou
Sat, 2011-04-30 08:59
Stan
I think that is a atmospheric piece, I like it a lot.
Love Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
scribbler
Sat, 2011-04-30 09:44
hello lou
I am pleased you enjoyed it..............stan
magics02
Sat, 2011-04-30 10:27
i like this stan
i relly like ti hard to write stan but wanted to tell you this liitle bit is a big warm thought and feel in your write here. talk soon or writ bettre when ican get felling back in lefthand,,love to you and sue xoxo
scribbler
Sat, 2011-04-30 11:53
Hi mona
Thank you and hope you get better soon............stan
scribbler
Sat, 2011-04-30 17:44
hello
I usually don't hang around, I hit "off" and leave lol. Thanks for stopping by........stan
scribbler
Sun, 2011-05-01 09:58
Thanks
(I think) now people will know one person to blame for the ever expanding types of poetry lol.............stan
scribbler
Sat, 2011-04-30 17:47
hello
WEll, actually I DID just make up this form and rules lol. It is kind of a Haiku for rhymers and those who don't count syllables. Still has rules, just different rules. Bet you could write a better one...........stan
Psyve
Sun, 2011-05-01 11:00
Stan,
Stan,
My goodness, I just realised I was writing Rhyku over three decades before you just invented it!
Here's one I wrote for a dimunitive young lady a long time ago. Lol!
SHORT AND...
Two eyes, two lips
Two hands two feet,
Very short
And very sweet.
Cheers,
Psyve
scribbler
Sun, 2011-05-01 17:43
hello
Nothing really new under the sun, huh? lol........................stan