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Bitch
.
Hey!
hold on
it's my turn
for god's sake
what is wrong with you
why do you persist
you do recognize obnoxiousness
as a flaw
don't you
everywhere you go
everything you do
fussin' and feudin'
flagrancy unimpaired
"my way, do it my way"
cut it out
use your self anointed "brillance"
for something worthwhile
learn how to
not be a bitch
...bitch
ok, now it's your turn
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Comments
brittle light
Fri, 2011-04-15 18:07
written to be humorous...but
written to be humorous...but we all know how exasperating some can be when lacking self awareness.
yeah, I suppose there will always be enough of this subject matter to write monumental tomes....while, of course, trying to keep a sense of humor about it!
thanks for stopping by
gratefully
Al
author commentCCfire
Fri, 2011-04-15 21:36
Humorous and not at the same
Humorous and not at the same time lol sadly some cannot see how what they say can be perceived, self awareness is a hard lesson for some to learn.
Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche